Reflection

Reflection
The items that I chose to put on my blog were My Day of Surfing and my Nature Essay. The reason I chose to put these two items is because I felt that they were my best two items of work. I also liked them the best as just a reader not an author. In my day of surfing I had to make a few changes. Some of the changes that I decided to make were to change a few of the words around to make it make more sense. I had to go back and add my brushstrokes and I had a problem with comma errors. In my Nature Essay I had to go back and add some more specific examples, which I did not do a good job of in the first place. Also I had to describe some other stuff like the trails in my story. Someone that has helped a lot is Luke. He has taught be to become a better writer. Even though it may not be apparent yet, I feel his advice will help me in the long run in my stories. He has helped a lot. Hank has also helped, he has just shown me some little tidbits on my writing make it make more sense. This will also take some time to sink in and help my writing in the long run.